Common App Essay Polish

<p>I think I’m just about done my commonapp essay after a few weeks (not constant, don’t worry) of editing and rewording. Would anyone mind reading it and giving a little feedback before I start sending it away? I’m on harvest break, so I’m not terribly rushed or anything… don’t worry about disappointing me! Bluntness and honesty are virtues and are always appreciated.</p>

<p>Thanks,</p>

<p>10jarsle</p>

<p>i’ll take a look if you would like-- email me with the essay as an attachment: <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>Hey, I’m honest and always love doing some editing for flow and the like! :slight_smile: PM me</p>