Can someone provide me with guiding tips on how I should approach my conclusion? What’s good about my essay? What needs additional work?
Leave a comment, and I’ll send you my essay. It’s about eyesight!
As a lifelong myopic and a veteran of retinal surgery, I’ll bite.
I sent the essay to you.
Yes. Returned with comments.
Your comments were much needed. I did contemplate whether or not that essay showed my cowardice of not being able to handle reality. I did use a thesaurus, but thank you for reminding me that my essay should sound natural. Thank you so much.