Hey everyone! I was wondering if I could get some feedback on my Common App Essay. Any feedback would be great! I am applying to Chapman and LMU. The prompt I used was the common app prompt 4. Thanks so much in advance! Here is the link to my essay https://www.dropbox.com/s/vvuut8qcd0vm5rx/CollegeEssay
Link didn’t work but you can PM me. I wouldn’t link your essay to the public anyway.