Common App Essay- Solid??

<p>I chose the prompt: Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.</p>

<p>Anyone willing to read it over and let me know if it’s any good?</p>

<p>I appreciate honesty.
top schools: UChicago, Boston College, Columbia</p>

<p>I can read it(:</p>

<p>I’d be glad to; send it over!</p>

<p>I can read it if you still need someone.</p>