<p>Will someone be wiling to read it and critique it? I feel as though theres no personal touch to it…I’m trying the best I can to make it more personal but I’d like to hear what others have to say.</p>
<p>I will read it.</p>
<p>thank you, pm’d it
any other readers? I really would like your help</p>
<p>sure, pm it</p>
<p>thanks, i’ll read urs too, send it over</p>
<p>anyone else? i really want to cut it down a bit :/</p>
<p>I’ll read if you don’t mind taking look at my Tufts supplement.</p>