Common app essay too long

<p>Hey, so i've finished my common app essay and it ended up being around 700 words..knowing the limit..i'm trying to deduce it as much as i can without ruining the content of the essay, would anyone like to review it please?</p>

<p>Sure, PM me!
I had the same started out as 800 words and then I slimmed it down to 545!!</p>