Common App Essay

<p>Hi would anyone mind reading my Common App Essay and critiquing it? </p>

<p>The prompt is to describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creative work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence. </p>

<p>Please keep in mind that it is a rough draft and will definitely be revised! Thank you!</p>

<p>You can send it to me if you'd like. :) I'll gladly take a look at it.</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>Sure me.</p>

<p>Thanks for reading it. I sent you a PM.</p>

<p>I'll take a look.</p>