common app essay

<p>would someone read it and tell me if it sounds ingenuine - pm me please</p>

<p>PM me the essay</p>

<p>thanks, would anyone else be willing to give some constructive criticism?</p>

<p>pm me . . .</p>

<p>pm me the essay too</p>

<p>I love reading essays. I could look at yours if you cud give me about a week. I have my SATIIs this SAt and I am free. but then, u can pm me.</p>

<p>i’ll take a look if you want</p>