<p>I wrote an essay for the Common App about what I photographed on a walk. I’ve done some editing, but I don’t feel like the essay is strong enough yet. Would anyone care to rip it apart? I’ll take all criticism. I’ll send a PM to anyone who replies.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>Go ahead and send it if you want.</p>
<p>I’d like to take a look :]</p>
<p>I’ll look at it</p>
<p>pm it dude</p>
<p>pm me, i’ll read it</p>
<p>Sure I hope I can help.</p>
<p>Thanks to all for reading.</p>
<p>i’ll read it!</p>
<p>Sorry if I sound pushy, but I’ve now sent it to seven people, and no one has responded.</p>
<p>Relax. We’re doing you a favor. It isn’t our obligation to write you back as fast as we possibly can. Trust me, some kid’s college essay online is not one of our biggest priorities. We’ll send it to you when we want to and you should be happy with that.</p>
<p>pm me…</p>
<p>pm it over</p>
<p>i can do a really comprehensive, analytical edit of your essay. pm me. :)</p>