<p>I’m thinking of applying to Brown, Columbia, Yale.</p>
<p>I’ve gotten mixed replies to my essay, could someone please edit it?</p>
<p>THanks alot:)</p>
<p>I can give it a look if you want, but I’m also a senior, so your call.</p>
<p>i’ll take a look if you would like me to-- email me your essay as an attachment. <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>If you still need help…</p>
<p>(I read your response to that thred about posting opening lines. What can I say? I was intrigued.)</p>