Common App Essay

<p>Would anyone (preferably anyone NOT applying to school this year, but I’d gladly switch essays with people who aren’t applying to my schools) like to read my first attempt at a Common App Essay? It’s about a group of freshmen I mentor, and I’m really worried about it.</p>

<p>I’m applying to Yale, Columbia, Brown, UVA, W&M, Wash U, Rice, and Pomona.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. I am, however, a 2014-er. But I’ve already been admitted ED to one of those schools you listed! haha.</p>

<p>Anyways, if you want to, send me an email! <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>