<p>I’ve been writing several essays for my application, and have ended up with two I dislike the least. Could anyone critique these drafts? I’ll PM you the essays after you post here.</p>
<p>Prompt for the first: Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you. </p>
<p>Prompt for the second: Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence. </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>