Common App Main Essay readers?

College Essays
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<p>PM me if you can read it.</p>

<p>I need critique on the essay as a whole, the content, the balance, and any other glaring errors. Or if I should start a new topic/essay from scratch.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

2

<p>I’ll read it if you can handle yelling</p>

3

<p>i definitely can. I’m PMing it over.</p>

4

<p>I can read it as well! :)</p>

5

<p>me .</p>

6

<p>if i sent you my essay, i’d love a response back. :]</p>