<p>can someone please read my essay and give me feedback? as you can see from the title, it’s a really weird subject and i don’t know if admission officers will like it :{ i reread it and it’s really blah but my college counselor said it’s witty so i don’t know :(</p>
<p>i’d love to read it over and help. PM me :]</p>
<p>Sounds interesting. Be glad to help.</p>
<p>Hello. </p>
<p>I could critique your essay. I have some great writing credentials. PM me if you like. </p>
<p>Sikhknowledge</p>
<p>lalala more people should help me because its the right thing to do</p>
<p>Sorry but I never received a PM YellowWoman.</p>
<p>does anyone else want to read it? good things will happen to you if you do!</p>
<p>Between your sn and your essay title, I’m curious. PM me and I can take a look :)</p>