Common App rough draft

<p>Hi! Can I bother anyone into reading my common app essay? It's the first rough draft, so the writing isn't great, but I'm more looking for feedback on the message and if I conveyed my passion.</p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

<p>I'll read; PM me :)</p>

<p>I'm an English major. Send me a PM and I'll read it and give you some feedback.</p>

<p>K I PMed you.</p>

<p>sure. PM me</p>

<p>I'll read it and provide feedback. Just PM it to me! :)</p>

<p>Sure!
Pm please</p>