<p>Could anyone please critique my short answer? I will more than gladly pm it to you for any pointers, comments, etc. Thank you!</p>
<p>They call me Mr. Benitez. My day regularly consist of: grabbing back-packs, putting on seat-belts, memorizing directions, adjusting routes, meeting with parents, and oh yeahmaking sure that fifteen overly anxious students get to and from school safe and on time. Forget about hard work; its an astronomical amount of responsibility and pressure, and Ill admit that most times it is quite stressful. However, working as driver for elementary schools has blessed me with a list of unforgettable skills and experiences that have contributed profoundly towards my shift from adolescence to adulthood. IMR Transportation, the company I work for, had put me through weeks of meticulous training before I completed my first route. And even then, I still had time constraints, bridges, traffic, re-routing, and flat tires to worry about. But with each setback the road brought, I learned how to adapt, developing a versatility that proved I could be just as dependable, mature, and professional as some of their former veteran employees, including my dad.</p>
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*o yeah phrase sounds a little slang</p>
<p>But I really like it!</p>
<p>Oops, didn’t catch that haha thanks! And yeah it kind of is; it’s the way I talk 
Would you know what I could do to change it?</p>