Common App short answer - looking for feedback

<p>EDIT: This is in response to the prompt: “Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (1000 character maximum).”</p>

<p>I’m applying ED and I am attempting to make the application as pristine as ever.</p>

<p>I have 2 selections, being 999 and 996 characters, respectively, and they both take some of the same stance and some of a different stance on what is essentially the same thing. I’d like to get some feedback on which to choose over the other, and if parts should be combined or left out. As many helping hands as possible would be amazing. I can PM both selections upon request. (I would post them here but then I thought about potential for plagiarism, among other problems)</p>

<p>PS This is my first post ever. Long-time lurker.</p>

<p>Ill read yours if you read mine?</p>

<p>I’ll read yours, I’m also working on mine.</p>