Common App Short Answer - wrong direction?

College Essays
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<p>I wrote a couple different drafts for the 150 word activity short answer, but I keep feeling I’m writing in the wrong direction. Can someone read it and give a short critique? thanks.</p>

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<p>PM me with yours and I will critique it for you…if you want mine just ask in your PM and I can give you mine to read too.</p>

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<p>pm me…</p>

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<p>thanks so far, any others?</p>

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<p>pm me! You will be welcome! :slight_smile: I will try to help you</p>

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<p>you can PM me</p>

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<p>PM me with ur short answer</p>