<p>I previously posted a topic about my essay, and incautiously uploaded my essay. It didn’t receive many comments so I really need some critics right now:( Anyone help me:( ( btw, it’s a narrative and 1000 words, but i think it’s not too dull to read:D)</p>
<p>i did comment ur essay right <em>just to make sure</em> :)?</p>
<p>I’m really, really sorry to say that I don’t remember:( I just remember there were 2,3 people comment on my post:(
<em>off topic</em> btw, are you on VA too? I see your nick familiar?</p>
<p><em>off topic answer</em> what is VA?
ok,j/k yes i am:)) how many ppl with that nickname do you know anyway:P</p>
<p>about your essay,well the last time i checked i was still the last to comment,and the next thing i know is that the thread is gone:)) so just in case you havent read it,i think u wrote a nice essay.it flows well,obviously not cliche’,the ending is great…etc though not yet wow or unique or anything.If you ask me I’d say the person-who-wrote-the-essay seems loving and family-and-friends-oriented.im not sure if that’s what adcoms look for,but who knows really:)</p>