Common App Transfer Essay- Help Needed

I originally thought that I would be fine writing my essay without soliciting feedback from a single person. It may just be due to the deadline approaching, but I am now have serious doubts about that decision. My main worry is that I have been missing grammatical errors, despite reading the some of these essays over 20 times.

If anybody has a bit of free time and would like to help by reading them, it would be much appreciated.

Sure! PM me

Feel free to PM me, too! I’m procrastinating so hard on my own that I might as well help out people with theirs.