<p>I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read/offer advice on my short answer response and essay. My short answer is written about playing the flute. On the short answer, I would like feedback on the clarity, whether or not my voice comes across and whether the response sounds interesting or just generic. </p>
<p>My essay is about how going to a canoeing camp for 7 years changed me as a person. I would like any editing help plus input on the following things:
- Do I sound as though I am bragging, or does it come across well
- Does it sounds unique and interesting or is it stuck in the cliched “summer camp” or “service trip” essay category
- Does my voice come across
- Does the essay flow well/anything regarding grammar or editing</p>
<p>Lastly, I am fairly wary of getting my writing copied, so I will only PM my stuff to you if you seem trustworthy/have many posts on CC. So if you are new here, no offense, but I will not be willing to PM you.</p>