Common Application Essay

<p>Will greatly appreciate it if anyone were to read and critique my completed common application. Will PM if you respond to my thread.</p>

<p>Subject: Experience from working at my first paid job.</p>

<p>I would love to read it :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it :]</p>

<p>bumpppppppppppppp</p>

<p>pm me if you will thanks.</p>

<p>I will read it</p>