Common Application Essays--I took some risks...

College Essays
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<p>I’m looking for some feedback on my Common Application essays. I wrote about how I go above and beyond the normal scope of involvement in my hobbies, but I took a few risks and I think my essay could use a few more eyes. I’ve edited a few times, but I think it still has continuity problems to be worked on.</p>

<p>Any help would be appreciated!</p>

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<p>Is this the 150 or the 500 word essay? Regardless, I wouldn’t mind helping. PM me.</p>

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<p>Pm me, I can read it</p>

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<p>I’d like to.</p>

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<p>me too…</p>

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<p>pm me…</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>