<p>it asks that I elaborate on one of my activities…tell me what you think…i know it can be better and im looking for some input…</p>
<p>The idea of fortunes being gain and lost in the blink of an eye attracted me to the New York Stock Market.I find nothing more exciting than taking risks.Being only a 17 year-old High School senior I know almost nothing about the “dog eat dog” world of the New York Stock Exchange. The idea of having my money work for me intrigues me. I currently own Stock in Microsoft Corp aswell as investments in a mutual fund. I often catch myself staring at the stock tickers instead of doing what needs to be done. The 23 cents gained on my stock feeding my hunger for fortune.</p>
<p>it sounds kinda “scripted” to me…what do you guys think?</p>