Common Essay

<p>Hey all,</p>

<p>I’ve received criticism on my common essay already, but I’m not sure how I’m going to approach the suggestions/comments I’ve received. Can anyone help me out? I can send the document with comments on it.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance :D</p>

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<p>Update: I’ve edited it to the best of my capabilities.
Can anyone read mine?</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>