Commonapp Essay

<p>Hey would anyone be willing to critique/comment on my common app draft? It's currently ~590 words long and I hope to condense it or keep it around the same length. After reading it over several times, I'm not sure if I characterized myself through the essay, but you folks can give me your opinion on that. I'd rather have people who are not applying to colleges this year read it, but if you must, I won't stop you :).</p>

<p>Sure. PM me. I'm a rising sophomore right now...</p>

<p>hmm doesn't look like you got many responses so i'll bump this for you. i'm a rising senior, but i'm basically done my common app essay so i'll read it if you want. i've got some good criticism on mine already.</p>

<p>I can read it. PM it.</p>

<p>Sure. PM. . . .</p>

<p>sure i'll read it. pm me
i've already graduated from high school</p>

<p>ill be more than happy to take a look at it.
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<p>yeah pm it to me too thanks</p>

<p>Sure. Feel free to PM it.</p>

<p>Ill edit it for you. Pm it</p>

<p>^ Hey I'm a Nets fan too, go VC.</p>

<p>Back on topic, feel free to pm me.</p>

<p>yeah, I'd like to read it...PM me.</p>

<p>i'll edit for you. PM me.</p>