<p>please critique it. I think I am finished but I really would appreciate any additional help:)
i’d rather no '14ers but i dont care that much</p>
<p>hi, please send it to <a href="mailto:masterus2005@sbcglobal.net">masterus2005@sbcglobal.net</a></p>
<p>I will send it back with feedback and corrections if needed.</p>