<p>Would anyone like to help me by critiquing my essay? It is about a community service project, but I tried to add some humor, which made it completely random. I had someone from school read it, and they just looked at me like I was crazy. So, it would be great to have a few more opinions. Just repost and I will PM you my essay. Thanks…</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you want me to :)</p>
<p>Thanks lightswitch, I PMed you. Anyone else???</p>
<p>Ill give some feedback if you want :)</p>
<p>sounds interesting…I can take a look :)</p>
<p>i will critique it</p>
<p>I don’t think it would be fair of me to critique urs since i will also be applying this year, but it sounds interestinG! reminds me of scrapbooking lol</p>
<p>I can look at it if you like</p>
<p>pm me ill look at it</p>
<p>I would love to take a look.</p>
<p>send it to me i will look at it</p>