Completely wrote a new essay! Feedback would be appreciated!

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys so I wrote a first essay that I didn’t really like so I wrote a completely new essay.
Any of you willing to give me some feedback?</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>Send it please.</p>

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<p>PM with title/prompt</p>

<p>To Rocking my Es: Stop digging up threads that were posted years ago. It does not take many “grey cells in the brain” (as per Poirot) to read the date on those threads, no?</p>

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<p>Cardsbball77: Sure. PM it over, and I can provide feedback.</p>

<p>And yeah, I agree with DSI…what’s with the reviving ancient threads? There are more than enough essay-help requests posted on an hourly basis.</p>

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<p>As a word of advice, even though the world of business runs on seconds as a measure of time, I think it is still important for businessman-wannabes to tell the difference from year to year.</p>

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<p>I’ll give you feedback. PM me please.</p>

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<p>PM me with the prompt and i’ll feedback within 24 hours.</p>

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<p>To the original poster, you might want to combine your original and your new essay. Often times, you might find that your original essay has gemstone ideas you might want to reuse. PM me if you like.</p>

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<p>PM it over!</p>

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<p>send it over</p>