<p>Hi everyone, I would appreciate it very much if you guys could critique on my Personal essay for Common app. Thanks a lot.</p>
<p>you haven’t posted it…</p>
<p>are you asking for someone to basically proofread it? if so, feel free to pm me</p>
<p>feel free to PM it to me as well.</p>
<p>Feel free to PM it.</p>
<p>Here are a few key points to remember. Be yourself.</p>
<p>If you try to show off, you will sound obviously fake.</p>