contribute to rice essay - need last minute suggestions/critiques

<p>I really procrastinated on this essay, and I wrote it rather quickly. It pretty much sucks, but if there is anything glaring that won’t require a complete rewrite (I don’t have the time), please let me know. Post here and I’ll email it to you if you’d like to read the essay.</p>

<p>Once again, please don’t tell me things that are very fundamentally wrong with it if it will require a complete rewrite; it won’t accomplish anything but bringing down my confidence.</p>

<p>Thank you so much!</p>

<p>I will if you feel comfortable with that, just sent mine off.</p>