Could a non-HS student read my essay? Please?

<p>I’d really appreciate it, because I don’t know if my essay is completely off-base or if it’s acceptable. </p>

<p>I would prefer a non-high school student with at least a moderate post count. I don’t want to seem snobby but after reading the ‘how not to get ripped off’ thing I’m kind of paranoid…like anyone would even want to steal it :/</p>

<p>Anyone? Please?</p>

<p>Actually, never mind. My dad says he’ll kill me if I share my essay :confused: I’ll try to get my English teacher to look at it.</p>