Could a Parent Read my Essay?

<p>I would really appreciate it!</p>

<p>I am applying to UMD-CP early action, and I don't want to show my essays to my parents for whatever reason. It's only 300 odd words so it shouldn't take more than 5 minutes. I basically just want to know what the tone is when a stranger reads it. And any huge structural flaws*</p>

<p>If you can do so, I'll PM it to you.</p>

<p>sure -- pm it to me -- I'll read it and give you an honest evaluation. My daughter did all this last year so it's kind of fresh.</p>

<p>I may have sent 2 messages, so read the newer one please.</p>

<p>Anyone else mind reading my essay? I want to send my application in tonight and I am not sure that Classof2015 is coming back online :p</p>

<p>I would be happy to read it!</p>

<p>I wrote one more essay if anyone wouldn't mind taking a look</p>