Could Anyone Please Read First Draft of Common App Essay?

<p>Hello, I just finished a first draft of an essay. It is about how my family has been through a lot of conflict and how I want to help resolve it. It is a first draft, so some of the details aren't perfect yet, I was just hoping for some feedback to see if it flows, or if it is even a good topic.</p>


<p>Sure, PM it over.</p>

<p>I will read your essay , and reply w/ suggestions if you would like- if I make suggestions are you ok w/that?</p>

<p>Pm me, I 'll read~!</p>

<p>@familyguy…suggestions are exactly what I wanted</p>

<p>I would love to help, just send it over :D</p>

<p>I’d be glad to read over it and provide some feedback! Just send it to me through a PM.</p>

<p>Sent, and thanks guys</p>

<p>I would be glad to look it over and offer constructive criticism or suggestions for improvement :)</p>

<p>I’ll look at it, pm it to me:)</p>

<p>sent. thanks!</p>

<p>sure i’ll read it</p>

<p>PM me too, i’d love to read it.</p>

<p>I’ll give a read.</p>