Could anyone polish my essay for me plzzz? i'm an int'l student =]

College Essays
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<p>Hi~ Like what it says in the title… DO tell me if u think there should be big changes in theme or wutever…i would be really really grateful if u could make corrections right on my essay =] i’m okay with it if u just make some comments, too… anyway… anything that i can get would be fine…</p>

<p>Anyone?? Thx!!!</p>

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<p>hellllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooo?</p>

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<p>Please pm or e-mail to (my-username)@gmail.com
Thanks. I’ll get it back to you in less than an hour!</p>

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<p>thank you =]</p>

<p>i was sleeping…(time zone thing…)</p>

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<p>sure can we switch essays?</p>

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<p>i guess yea…^^ but i’m not sure if mine’s good enough lol…</p>

<p>my e-mail: <a href="mailto:sw33typrincessfaerie@yahoo.com">sw33typrincessfaerie@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>if you still need someone to look over it, you can PM it to me.</p>

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<p>thx =]
10char…</p>

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<p>You can send it to me too, if you haven’t already finished it…</p>