<p>I really want to go to U of C more than anything. It is my absolute first choice, and I feel that it is right for me more than another other institution in the world. The only thing that is holding me back is my GPA (3.0 out of 4), and class rank (190 out of 349). (One of the top public high schools in the state, maybe #25). My recommendations explained all that I have had to go through during my high school years, such as having a terminally ill father and a mother who has been intstutionalized three times, and also a breast cancer survivor. This is on top of my own kidney disease that I have been born with.It has been hard generally thoughout my life with both households, except before high school I was a perfect student getting mostly A+'s and always getting the best grades in my class, but as I got to high school, things had gotten worse. It has been hard throughout high school, especially last year, because there would be times in which both households were not exactly the greatest for me to live in, so it was really a struggle. I had even applied to boarding school last year with the help from my cousin, because I had needed to get away. (I didn’t end up getting in, because they do not normally except seniors ever). </p>
<p>I have taken a total of 8 regular college preporatory courses, 17 honors, and one AP (World History). </p>
<p>I have excellent extracurricular activites, (Violin since third grade, part of string orchestra, pit orchesta for musicals, and full orchestra, also junior year I was member of the music honors society. I have also been a copy editor for the school paper in tenth grade, and contributing writer in 11th and 12 grades. Ever article I have written for the paper has been published, and our paper has won an Honorable Mention each of the last four years at the annual conference of the New England Scholastic Press Association. I am also president/creator of my high school STAND chapter, which is an antigenocide coalition) My volunteering hours have been about 220 altogether.</p>
<p>I show my mature and intellectual ability through my writing, and I hope the admissions officers can see this. My essays are in my opinion, outstanding, and very “chicago”. My interviewer read my extended essay and loved it. My essays are the strongest parts of my application. </p>
<p>My alumni interview went very well and he said he would write a “mind blowing” evaluation of me.</p>
<p>I have indicated that Chicago is my first choice in my essays, to my admissions counselor and to my interviewer.</p>
<p>I also wrote the U of C a letter with my mid-year report, basically saying how my transcript does not accurately reflect my intellectual abilitly, and that I feel that I am a very great match for chicago, and that although I may be perceived as “risky”, I know I am ready and will perform well at the university.</p>
<p>I am also a minority (on the common app I had indicated “black”, but I talked about being biracial in my personal statement)</p>
<p>I took the Feb ACT (On the practice tests I scored perfect on the science section, and 33 out of 36 on the math). I seem to do well on the act practice tests. Normally on standardized test practice I do the same on the practice as I do on the actual test. I will most likely be in the range of a composite score of somwhere around 31-33 out of 36. </p>
<p>My recommendations in general are very strong. I have my current Russian Lit teacher writing one, of whom I have one of the highest grades in his class, and my spanish teacher of whom I had for two years in high school. My Guidance counselor said she really advocated for me and wrote a very strong recommendation, and said that there is a lot of unmet potential that has been met during high school. She had written to the uchicago that I would do very well at the university.</p>
<p>On the special circumstances section of the common app, I had written a page and a little bit about what I had been through (sort of expanding I guess on what my guidance counselor had written). I did go into detail, but I hope this is not a bad thing.</p>
<p>All in all, I am wondering and hoping, if Chicago will clearly see my intellectual ability, and that I am a very good match for the college intellectually. I hope they can see my essays as an indicator of my ability, and not just superficial aspects such as my transcript. I hope they will accept me and take a chance on me instead of accepting someone with higher stats in my place. It is quite evident in my application that I am not “ignorant”, and that I believe that intellectually I am far above my peers at school, and clearly my grades do not reflect this, although they are explained.</p>
<p>(sorry for such the long post, I just have a lot to say)</p>