Could one of you parents please read & critique my essay?

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<p>Hi parents, sorry if I shouldn’t post this here but I feel like I can you all on this board more :)</p>

<p>If someone is willing to I can send you a PM with the prompt & essay. I’ve already had my English teacher read over it but I like second opinions and I honestly think I could have done much better on the essay.</p>

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<p>PM it to me. I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>Oops, well it seems I can’t send a PM until I get at least 15 posts so I will have to wait a bit before I send it.</p>

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<p>OP - I know you are posting on the parents forum but in general it’s not a good idea to give out your essay to strangers on the internet. There is always a possibility they could be a high school student and they could copy it and use it themselves.</p>