<p>The prompt is in the header of the essay.</p>
<p>I also included a title (Please tell me if I should remove it).</p>
<p>Please be honest about the critiques and offer suggestions on how I could improve it.
And if possible, identify any grammatical errors.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
<p>Please leave your email address if you are interested.</p>
marite
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<p>Send me the essay by private message and I’ll take a look.</p>
<p>I just revised it a bit and will send you the revision now.</p>
<p>Could anyone else help?</p>
cncm
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<p>i’ve also got some essays that i’d like some feedback on…anyone willing to take the time to read them. Thanks in advance. :)</p>
<p>pm me, and I’ll see if I can help.</p>