I am a Uruguayan student. Here we are not accustomed to this kind of writing so, I would really appreciate if someone could read it, and then could tell me his or her sincerely opinion. If you have enough time to read it, just comment your name down below and I will send it to you. Thank you!
Yup. I’ll take a look. 
Thank you really much, I have already sent you the essay. Please be sincere
if you want, I can as well!
Sure I can have a look.