Could someone critique this essay?

College Essays
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<p>I’m ready to be ripped apart :slight_smile: It’s 500 words free response. The title is “Sympathy for the Devil”. Thank you!</p>

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<p>PM with title/prompt.</p>

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<p>PM me, I’ll give you feedback!</p>

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<p>sure I just wrote a long informative critique for someone else’s essay! pm</p>

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<p>Sure, I’m interested. PM me. :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>sure, send it along to <a href="mailto:zweebopp@yahoo.com">zweebopp@yahoo.com</a> Mick!</p>