Hi there!
I felt like my first draft of my Common App essay made me seem like some kind of robot, so I changed it up quite a bit. Now there’s another problem: Was I being too emotional? I’m very aware of the fact that what’s a big struggle to you might seem like a piece of cake to other people.
Could someone please take a look at my essay and tell me whether or not I did a balanced, effective job? Thanks!
Here’s my email: sd112358101@gmail.com