Could someone please read my common app essay due 1/1/14?

<p>Any help would be appreciated. I’m not the best writer and I tried really hard and it took me a while to get at where I am and this is what will either get me accepted or deffered. Thanks for any of your help. If you can’t pm me for some reason my email is zmanlane1@g mail.com</p>

<p>Thanks to everyone who already helped. Anyone else?</p>

<p>Wait, are we supposed to message you about this?</p>

<p>Wasn’t the date 1/1/14, 361 days ago?</p>