<p>Hi, I’m practicing for my upcoming SAT essay portion, and the practice question and my answers are as follows. Could you grade my essay? Also, if you could give me (at least, but not limited to) a brief overview of what I should have done or what could have been improved, it’ll be much appreciated. Thanks!*</p>
<p>“Justice is nothing more than the interest of the stronger.” - Thrasymachus</p>
<p>I disagree with the idea that the strong can do what they wish. While some many argue that “justice is nothing more than the interest of the stronger,” it can be arguably countered by looking at some of the actions and efforts taken, throughout the course of history, to protect the right of the weak and the minorities. Looking at an international organization and a country’s premise over fair qualities to all, we can see that it is not always the stronger ones who win.</p>
<p>Toward the end of 20th century<em>, a substantial amount of countries around the world was in a radical change. With the new emphasis on the life qualities of many minorities, such as industrial workers, the weak and old, children, among many others, nations around the world sought to create a multinational organization to protect the weak ones from the interest of the stronger. As a result, the United Nations, or UN, was formed. Founded in 1942</em>*, this organization has been assisting those in dire need of help, including millions of African people suffering from diseases and hunger, the endangered animals and plants throughout the globe, and our world slowly going into destruction by careless human-made pollutions. They also seek to prevent the unilateral dominance of stronger countries over weak countries. This organization has been the trademark of the world, showing that the stronger cannot always do what they wish to do.</p>
<p>Another example can be found in the U.S. contitution. suffering from the unilateral rule by an English king, the United States sought to create a government that can give power to powerless, it is stated that “all men are created equal.” Our effective government system shows that the world cannot and must not be dominated by the strong.</p>
<p><em>This information may be wrong
*</em>This information, I am pretty sure, is wrong. I just put it there because I learned that the graders aren’t allowed to check the authenicity of the data.</p>
<p>P.S. You can grade me as harshly as you want, because I know it’s far from perfect. Just please don’t give me a blatant “1” for arbitrary reasons. That’s just rude and careless 
In the meantime, any criticism will be appreciated!!! :D</p>