Crazy person in the house, please critique.my dumb essay!

<p>I got.tired of.trying to.write good, so I sais french toast this.I am wait by about how crazy I am. It sounds much more like me.
Please critique. It is for prompt 2 of the UC statement.</p>

<p>If mars hold life, my ancestors can be traced back to the red planet. I thought about this one time, when I came to school dressed as a ninja/ pirate. Yes I said it I came to school dressed like that. It was an experience that probably told me that I and other people definitely do not think on the same frequency. It is like I get FM, and they get AM. </p>

<p>When I tell people I want to become a director, they look at me like I am mental patient. What kind of girl, who dressed up like a ninja/pirate can be a director? Those two just do not connect with each other. Well I can say that I have much more creative ideas than somebody who dressed like a typical cat.</p>

<p>When I walked into school that day, people started snickering, gossiping, typical ways that high school students express their feelings. I just shrugged it off. I did not look like everyone else, which made me proud. It is similar to how films look; if it does not look like another film, and then it is much more enjoyable because the audience is viewing a concept that is out of the box. I am someone who can create that different view. I mean I did it on Halloween. </p>

<p>The experiences of dressing like a ninja pirate help me realize my true identity; I am a free spirit; I do not follow a crowd. A specific example is when I had my thanksgiving feast; everyone took food related to thanksgiving and I took lollipops. Chocolate covered lollipops. I wanted to do something different, something noticeable that can be much more dramatic than just bringing some mashed potatoes. </p>

<p>Film requires thinking outside; I think outside the box. What better job is there for me than filmmaking? Doctors cannot think outside the box, burses cannot either so I do not want to follow those paths.</p>

<p>I am bizarre, plain and simple. I eat vegetables for dessert, I dress up like ninjas on a regular basis, and I write stories about how my plant died. Darth Vader is my role model. It sounds crazy. What can a crazy kid contribute to a campus, but I think I have some ideas that can help me down the road.</p>

<p>I know people will read this, and be like” yeah this kid is way to nutty, she will probably switch her major ten times in one day.” Let me say that I have a clear path; Film making. I do not care if I end up on “Weirdest Directors Ever” because at least I stuck to the right path. I am proud of being what people call a” mental patient in training”. At least my way of thinking can be much more interesting then somebody who only thinks about what type of hair they have. I want to be able to say “Yeah I made a movie about talking trees and what?”</p>