Criticize and edit my essay please

<p>Can someone look at my essay? </p>

<p>I want to perfect my essays because my dream school is most likely a reach.</p>

<p>PM me if you want to look at my essay</p>

<p>Im a future candidate but wont plagiate ur essay in any form.
Pm me if u want, i can give u some honest opinions</p>

<p>Bump </p>

<p>do you guys want me to post my essay on the thread? </p>

<p>I dont think if i say “PM me please,” people want to edit my essay</p>

<p>I would advise against posting your essay right onto the thread–in a sense, it puts it “up for grabs.” However much honesty we would wish from others, it is likely unwise to publish such sensitive material outside of a private message to someone you trust.</p>

<p>Try working with members who have a solid number of posts and have been here for a while–perhaps even eyeing the <a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/552302-consolidated-list-essay-readers-cc.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/552302-consolidated-list-essay-readers-cc.html&lt;/a&gt; thread could be of help to you.</p>

<p>Good luck!</p>