criticize me captain

College Essays
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<p>anyone wanna read my common app essay? constructive criticism por favor</p>

2

<p>would it help this late in the game? if it does, you can private message it to me</p>

3

<p>i’ll help…just pm me.</p>

4

<p>I’ll help anyone with the username “tennisboy___”. PM me.</p>

5

<p>Sure, I’ll take a look at it.</p>

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<p>still not late? …I will if you will want criticisms.</p>

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<p>sure (10char)</p>

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<p>lol…ok. You need a comma before “captain” in your thread name!</p>

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<p>pm me and i’ll look.</p>

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<p>If you need some essay help send me an ol PM :). I can edit it extremely thoroughly.</p>