Criticize my Essay!

College Essays
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<p>hey guys,</p>

<p>i’d really appreciate it if a couple of you could just check out my essay, and point out what you think could be improved</p>

<p>PM me</p>

2

<p>i will homie</p>

3

<p>hey- ill check it out, though i most likely will only comment if i see a glaring error-- trying to get modivated to work on more hw…</p>

4

<p>it will be my pleasure to take a look</p>

5

<p>ok
just pm me</p>

6

<p>I’ll read it if you want, pm me.</p>

7

<p>sure, i’ll give you feedback
pm me</p>