Critique It!!!!!

<p>Hey guys, I was wondering if you could read and critique my essay. BE CRITICAL since I'm applying to Columbia, Cornell, Syracuse, and Vassar. Please judge my essay and tell me what I have to do to separate myself from the rest of the other applicants since I really want to go to these schools. Please and Thank you:)</p>

<p>I’ll read it and try to provide the advice you’re looking for</p>

<p>sure send it</p>

<p>I’ll read it! Can you read mine too?</p>

<p>Could anyone read mine too?</p>

<p>i’d like to read it and give you feedback.</p>

<p>Thank you guys for the comments you had my essay, I took all your considerations and at this point I’m on my 4th rough draft on this essay and I’m expecting to do more with my AP Lit teacher.</p>