<p>It’s actually 139 words but I’d like some feedback and critique on it, please. I tried to incorporate imagery, music, culture, and an epiphany all in one short essay.</p>
<p>I’d read it (note - I’m 08)</p>
<p>Thanks. I’ll PM it to you.</p>
<p>i wouldn’t mind taking a look</p>
<p>Okay. Thanks. PMing it to you now.</p>