Critique my common app essay

College Essays
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<p>I’m pretty sure it sucks</p>

2

<p>If you want I can look at it ( I’ve critiqued some essays already for common app) but usually I have found that they dont “suck” unless you just wrote it out and considered it done just like that on first draft. Even then they dont suck, they are just ill-edited ( lol amazing use of english)</p>

3

<p>Bump</p>

4

<p>I can read. </p>

5

<p>Hallejulah</p>

6

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

7

<p>bUMP</p>